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From: Igor XA <igorxa@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Mon, 14 Jun 2004 02:12:12 +0000 (UTC)
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Resent-sender: Robin Lee Powell <rlpowell@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
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i think your site is hilarious, but there is one thing that sticks out that detracts from its poignancy. "you appear to not be one of them" contains a split infinitive. the sentence shoud read, "you appear not to be one of them." "smart people" wouldn't split infinitives. just fyi.

joey

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